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You Are Fair
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:06:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You are fair
Fair as can be
Fair as the moonbeam
Upon the sea
I pray to hold
You close once more
And walk with you
Upon the shore
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wachumiri
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2004-08-08 18:06:14]
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Re: You Are Fair
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by ChinaRivera on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:27:32 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Short & sweet! - china |
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Re: You Are Fair
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:28:36 PM AEST
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*sighs*
David, I know you are a romantic. And Carrrie is the coolest person ever, but...
You certainly reduced Carrie to a cliche with this one. Sorry.
Em |
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Re: You Are Fair
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 01:32:23 AM AEST
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What IS it with these typos? I know. You're turning to drink because you haven't seen Carrie for a few weeks. Pathetic, hopeless, miserable...
Er, yeah. Anyway, have a fir day yourself.
Andrew |
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Re: You Are Fair
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:58:25 PM AEST
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I must say the "fir" thing was quite disturbing. But, I can't complain that you're thinking about me. That's always nice. And walks upon the shore aren't all too bad either....as long as you don't throw me in!!!! I love you.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: You Are Fair
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:48:19 PM AEST
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How do you constantly come up with these?
5 stars!
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Re: You Are Fair
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:40:10 AM AEST
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| Romance, tenderness, love. What more do you need? |
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