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Wait Patiently
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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To by your side
Be every day
Wrapped in your arms
I'd ever stay
But time for that
Has yet to be
For now we must
Wait patiently
So sorrow not
My Love, be glad
Warm in my arms
You'll not be sad
Oh, Carrie dear
I love you so
I'll never, never
Let you go
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by Jaylynne on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:16:45 PM AEST
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good poem
~jaylynne |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:16:49 PM AEST
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Whoa! I need to let the chills go away now. True love waits patiently, so I trust you to continue to show your love by your actions. Thank you for your love. I love you, and don't let go.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:15:23 PM AEST
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| Awww.... how sweet... Thihs poem is as sweet as diabetes!! haha.. Great work, pal! |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by Oriana on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:54:39 PM AEST
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| *grabs a box of tissues and wipes eyes* That is so sweet let us know when you get married okay! ^_^ Oriana |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:59:23 AM AEST
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*Feels a lil alienaited* lol as i see u have many friends as well as fans of this poem..well here i add another fan. Great write :)
Alucia, |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:31:56 PM AEST
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oy.... don't worry, you WILL be married!! Just do as you said.... wait patiently for it! :-)
Em |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:39:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful....Good luck on marrying Carrie! You seem like such a great guy and she should be so lucky to be with you until she or you dies...great poem
summer |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:38:15 PM AEST
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| I love these short writes of yours! oh and watch out for those librarians they've been known to do things with..... you know (books)!! |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by Archie on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:14:30 AM AEST
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| This is very cool. I have read a few poems like this by you and each one is filled with purity and respect. I hope things work out for the two of you. |
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Re: Wait Patiently
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by anitajames on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:39:08 AM AEST
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| Carrie, if you don't marry him, I have a single friend. Just kidding. Great job. |
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