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Pizza & Tatters
Contributed by
Alina
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:36:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I'm so close yet so far
I'm stuck where I'm at
I try to move forward
But you're pulling me back
You lock me down
I'm bounded by your chains
So I pop you in
And you erase my pain
I love your sweet taste
But you always slow my thinking pace
I want to leave you
Leave you forever
But as hard as I try
My lust for you will never die
I don't need you but I want you
And I don't care why...!!!
In rememberance of PWee
Copyright ©
Alina
... [
2004-08-08 18:36:03]
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Re: Pizza & Tatters
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:33:35 PM AEST
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This poem was definitely very original. Great job
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Re: Pizza & Tatters
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by Oriana on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:45:48 PM AEST
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| even though it's ment to be a sad poem I can't help but smile reading it. must be because it sounds kinda funny to me if you don't think about what your reading or have just finished writing something....anyway....Very good poem keep it up. Oriana |
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Re: Pizza & Tatters
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:38:05 AM AEST
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I second the comment above lol...this was meant to be sad but it does make u smile.. good write tho :)
Alucia, |
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