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You
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:48:43 PM in AEST
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There you were,
Right out of my reach.
You stare me in the face every day,
I don't know these feelings, I've never felt them before.
You told me you felt the same way,
And at the end you brushed me off and called me a whore.
Then why?
Why did you leave me?
Whatever I don't care anymore, or so I thought.
But who cares,
We're through,
By the way **** you!!!!!!!!!!
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BlazeingHeart
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2004-08-08 19:48:43]
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Re: You
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:54:06 PM AEST
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OUCH! But if they called you that nasty word they definitely deserved that! I like this, it was a nice rant! I certainly wouldn't want you angry at me! haha well anyways, good job, hope you begin to feel better soon.
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Re: You
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:57:15 PM AEST
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| There doesn't seem much behind this. Anger, yes, but shallow anger. Surely an event like this might provoke deeper thoughts? |
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