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Hope
Contributed by
BekahLynnSmith
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:15:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I love the feeling you give me
showing me you are there
And when you hold me close
telling me you care
I have never felt this feeling
that is running through my heart
I seem to think more about you
when we are apart
Could it be I am falling in love
or is it just a fling
Whatever this feeling is
I hope its the real thing
You have stolen my heart
and now it belongs to you
Lets be completely devoted
and make this feeling true
Copyright ©
BekahLynnSmith
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2004-08-09 01:15:12]
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:54:25 AM AEST
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Nicely written.
Simple and sweet-sounding.
I liked the first two stanzas. |
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