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** ‹› ** CUT TO THE CORE ** ‹› **

Contributed by ChinaRivera on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:51:54 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



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Cut To The Core. Cut to the chase.
A death blades upon the human race.
One go*s numb and feels pain no more.
Just give one a bandage to put on the sore.

Gush the blood seeps. Cut To The Core!
Cut deep enough to heal up no more.
Look at it, you can almost see the bone.
Look at what happens when we*re left alone!

Now we all wonder: *is this the last breath?*
Cause all of mankind is bleeding to death!
Can*t anyone help? Doesn*t anyone care?
Then why is the dead still laying there?

Look at their poor souls, laying there cold.
Dying! Pondering about a destiny unknown.
Will one see the light of day no more?
Why do people act in ways that aren*t culture?

Look at us, We lay dead to be picked by vultures! Us dirtballs are all pigs in the pin together! Why do we stupidly kill off one another? What sense does it make?

We*re putting our own existence at stake!
The moral codes arent here for anyone to brake. A life isn*t here for anybody to take.
People should think for heavens sake!

We*re all born into sin as a slave! We owe our lives to Jesus, Thank God by his blood our debts are paid! Trashing where the soul resides can make it lash back at your demise!

Come to God and Realize that Natures got its eye on You! Seek to know Gods love and be faithful. Believe in Jesus Christ the messiah! Don*t get thrown into the eternal Fire!

Pray to jesus *please, save me* and sin no more! Does one not know what Life has in store? Let us keep Gods Law in our hearts, and endure! Do they heed the message to kill no more? Or will they choose to be Cut To The Core.

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Copyrights 2004 By China Rivera




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Re: ** ‹› ** CUT TO THE CORE ** ‹› ** (User Rating: 1 )
by becca_bruce2000 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:49:46 AM AEST
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I like it a lot I am new at writing but I think it is great!!!


Re: ** ‹› ** CUT TO THE CORE ** ‹› ** (User Rating: 1 )
by TheBlackVoid on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:23:52 AM AEST
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I'm not always a strong believer..but i can relate to some of this. Great write
Alucia,


Re: ** ‹› ** CUT TO THE CORE ** ‹› ** (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 09:54:37 AM AEST
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this was very good
it displays a lot of emotions
Good Job!




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