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The Lonesome Few
Contributed by
Luka
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:57:58 PM in AEST
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We all get that feeling
the feeling nobody wants
the feeling that the losers get
the one u cant shake
the one thats stuck to you like glue
u always here it will soon pass
but thats a lie
nothing like that can pass
here we sit
the lonesome few
here we are and here we stay
waiting for that one special day
here we sit the lonesome few
waiting for something new to do
lonely and tired
and tired of being lonely
this is us
the lonesome few
Copyright ©
Luka
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2004-08-09 14:57:58]
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Re: The Lonesome Few
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by arden on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:08:31 AM AEST
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nice, you both did an awesome job. i really enjoyed this write.
great work. keep it up
5 stars
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Re: The Lonesome Few
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:59:12 PM AEST
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This is a good poem...i know the feeling...the feeling of completely alone....we all feel sometime...great job
Lots of Love
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