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Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:07:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Happiness over shadowing all of the pain
Your smile taking away much of my shame
Your eyes calm me from my heightened state
You are keeping me from my eventual fate
Letting me live another day
I wish I could repay you some way
Hold on while you still have me
Hold on or I will fall down
Remember these days we had together
Remember them when I am no longer around
I can not escape my fate forever
I can not help looking over my shoulder
So do not blame me for living as a shell
Come with me now and together we'll dwell
Since I started talking my life has been changed
And I never want to go back to being estranged
I release the pain I feel now
I release it to the sky
I want to be with you
And I will never cease to try
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poet_of_anger
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2004-08-09 16:07:56]
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Re: Try
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by waos on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:13:51 PM AEST
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| This was the first thing of yours that I have read and I really really liked it. I could see similarities in your circumstances to mine. Thanks for posting it, I really enjoyed it. |
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:16:38 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. It was beautiful and it flowed nicely. I'm so sad that you're leaving! :[
Katie |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:52:42 PM AEST
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So the Poet of Anger is angered no longer, I am happy for you. Though I will say that I hope you try to write happy poems now to replace the angry ones, rather than fade away...
Jaime |
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Re: Try
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:27:03 PM AEST
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Godspeed, kind sir. May you find your self safely home. Thank you for your kind words of my efforts. I look forward to a day when you can again do battle on paper with words. A wonderful write ... you shall be missed.
Naz ~ |
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Re: Try
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:47:00 PM AEST
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I wish you the best of luck. May an angel protect you from harm. God speed.
Rita |
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Re: Try
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by Lovingangel4u on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:02:20 PM AEST
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Another lovely write your poems have gone from strength to strength. I hope you will one day write here again. I wish you all the very best take care and may God be with you always.
~Carmen~ |
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Re: Try
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by outsider on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:39:05 AM AEST
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| This is an excellent write, one of the best poems i've read on this site. Good luck to you, all the best, and i hope you continue to write. |
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