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'Us'
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:41:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Every time I tried to change
You ignored me, said I was strange
I wasn't an animal you could tame
But you wanted me to remain the same
We were trying to start a relationship
But those fights we had began a rip
My hair, my clothes, the rip tore
Until I couldn't talk to you anymore
You asked me to talk about 'us'
But then all we could do was cuss
I'm the one who finally said the good-byes
And I didn't miss those tears in your eyes
So how come when I see you around work
It's on you that my eyes seem to lurk?
I can't get you out of my head
I'm remembering everything you said
When we sit and talk the feeling's there
I look and know that you still care
But here I am, and there you hide
Your silence is killing me inside
You say you can't deal with my 'uniqueness'
Your 'perfect love' has turned to such a mess
I love you, so how come everything I try
Ends with one of us drying our eyes?
Jaime Moran
August 7, 2004
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Re: 'Us'
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by luckycharm on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 06:06:37 PM AEST
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| That poem was good. I like your unique style in your writing and I hope to see more of your work. Keep writing!!!.-luckycharm. |
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Re: 'Us'
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:20:11 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. You made the right choice. Anyone that can't accept you for you isn't the one for you. Easier said than accepted, but true nonetheless. I'm proud of you for doing the right thing, even though it was (and is) obviously hard. *hugs*
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Re: 'Us'
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:31:17 PM AEST
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I really like your poem here Jaime.....there are very strong emotions here obviously, but love is not fighting and tears. Love is tender with increased joys down through the years.
Great poem.,well stated and easily related!
Good job indeed!
Poetic hugs,
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Re: 'Us'
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:42:58 AM AEST
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Not that I'm sure *uniqueness* is a word, how can one not deal with it? shesh, you're "uniqueness" is what sets you apart from others. Stupid biatch. She doesnt know what she's missing. *huffs*
Your sister
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