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Just Stop
Contributed by
NobodySpecial
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:09:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't look at me like that.
Don't touch me with your hands.
Don't call me "number one".
Don't try to talk to me.
Go away, I wrote you out.
Come near me one more time
and I will blow your brains away.
I finally escaped your wrath,
never will I be under your submission again.
You said you would save me.
You said that you loved me.
You said that you needed me.
You said I would be hurt if I ever told.
Now look who holds the power.
It surely isn't you.
Say goodbye to your little game.
My Baba, My Daddy, it's over.
Never again will you hold me.
Never again will you look into my eyes.
Never again will you laugh at my pain.
Never again will you hurt me like you did.
I left you in a heartbeat.
I took away the torment.
You should have known that it would happen.
One can only live in hell for so long.
I swear if you touch Bryce like you touched me
you will have no more air to breathe.
My Baba, My Daddy, I wish I could say that I hate you.
But I cant, I could never hate you.
You are still my Baba, and to you I am still your "number one".
But I can never forgive you for what it is that you have done.
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NobodySpecial
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Re: Just Stop
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by Luka on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:24:54 PM AEST
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| not to bad man not to bad at all, you let ppl nknow what u were thinking, without hideing what u mean, takes a lot of balls and i bet some ppl will say thats not right to do but just dont care, you are who u are, nice job |
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Re: Just Stop
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by NobodySpecial on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:59:18 PM AEST
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| I dont have balls... |
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Re: Just Stop
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:37:48 AM AEST
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| it's funny b/c i had already assumed you were a chick. so the whole balls thing was funny. anyway Luca was right it takes something and you definitly have "it". good job and i hope bryce is alright. |
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Re: Just Stop
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:59:20 PM AEST
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This is a good write...excellent job...im sorry for what your goin through
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Just Stop
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:02:17 PM AEST
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Sad, touching -painful! I felt the emotion all the way through your poem. Amazing write, amazing power!
Laurie |
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Re: Just Stop
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:25:10 PM AEST
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| Hey Chick... I do believe this is a poem. I can say yes you have a pussy and you have balls by leaving a good poem like this on this site |
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