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Pleasure vs. Suicide
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 08:08:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Desperate times,
desperate measures.
Its amazing what you get
from lifes little pleasures.
The kiss of the blade,
the hug of the trigger,
the relaxation of the pills
that seem to get bigger and bigger.
Too much pleasure
can be a good thing.
Time can be over
before youve had time to think.
Kiss like youve never kissed before,
hug more and more,
relax like youll work for the rest of your life.
Pretty soon it all will just be called suicide.
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2004-08-09 20:08:54]
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Re: Pleasure vs. Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:04:39 PM AEST
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I realy like your writing scheme it works and if you ment what you said hang in there.
hakiokusaken
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Re: Pleasure vs. Suicide
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by desire on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 06:36:28 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a wonderful poem, I like the style you wrote in thanks for sharing |
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