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Life's Sacred Key
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:01:23 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Life's Sacred Key
All you'll ever see
Is what's above beneath
Never going deep
Afraid of what you'll see
The soul that you keep
Has been dying unseen
Those who really see
Life's sacred key
Nothing is free
Especially the soul that you keep
Hiding mistakes and secrets beneath
I find the secrets beneath
As you still pretend
That you're not dying within
You couldn't trancend
You have no reason to live
You can't accept who you are within
Life's sacred key is now in your hands
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2004-08-09 22:01:23]
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Re: Life's Sacred Key
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by arden on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:50:36 PM AEST
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this was a very thoughtful poem. very interesting. emotional and deep.
it was awesome. you did a really good job and should be proud of your talent.
great work. 5 stars
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Re: Life's Sacred Key
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:43:21 PM AEST
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man this is great...
please comment on my work too
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Re: Life's Sacred Key
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by skyblumoon on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:51:42 AM AEST
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Keep them coming you have talent.
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