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My New 'Life'
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:39:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My life is now my suicide.
Drowning in my own
crimson sorrows,
sorry I ever tried to die.
My soul is now my
cuts and tears,
tragedies and regrets.
My future's now my past,
for everyhting's gone gray.
Nothing's the same,
yet nothing changes,
for I'm existing in a fake world.
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WorthlesSanity666
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2004-08-09 23:39:50]
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Re: My New 'Life'
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:48:52 PM AEST
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Nothing's the same,
yet nothing changes,
for I'm existing in a fake world.
I love those lines the best, I feel exactly the same. Overall I loved the whole poem, it strikes a chord in me and though it's depressing it's enjoyable to read. Now go to sleep before you start drooling in front of the computer. ;) |
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Re: My New 'Life'
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:36:51 PM AEST
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Dude! this is some seriouse poetry!
this is totally how i feel!
amazing write!
My future's now my past,
for everyhting's gone gray.
those are my fave lines, they kind of remind me of one of the 1st poems i did, i think its called No More Colour or somethin like that!!
keep it up! i meen it! and..
Doot-Doodle-Oot-Doot--Doo-Doo!
tweek |
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