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she cries
Contributed by
betty
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:25:44 AM in AEST
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Something lighter
she cries
beligerently
reaching in vain
hoping for simplicity
she sighs
intensity
closing in
begging for silence
she pleads
ignorance
all encompassing
fearing my words
she dies
simplicity
lost.
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-08-10 04:25:44]
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Re: she cries
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:53:41 AM AEST
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Well written, had a flow to it and was easy to read, leaving no doubt.
Keep on writting let your talent free.
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Re: she cries
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:15:52 PM AEST
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I'm not really sure i can understand the significance of this poem, Betty, but I did enjoy it just the same.
Please forgive my ignorance, doesn't take away the beauty of your write.
Poetic hugs
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