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sorry
Contributed by
inoc
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 08:46:04 AM in AEST
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Last night I wrote a poem that I regret
it was about my hubby that I love and never want to forget
our lives have been stressed lately so we argued a bit
and to make ME feel good I wrote a poem about it
after reading Karrie's poem before - called 'my hubby' he sounds fine!
I remember our lives being so happy we'd talk- with a stubby and he does sounds like mine!
[--one day we'll look back at this life and say we made the struggle
that things did work out and we still love to cuddle
we belong to each other and surely have no more pain
respecting each others love is what we will gain --]
just the feelings from last night were again in rage
I appolagise now so you can now click to the next page!
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inoc
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2004-08-10 08:46:04]
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Re: sorry
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:02:01 AM AEST
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Very nice poem....If he loves you.......he will understand. Poems are outlet.......and it's good you have to write it all down. It's a very good release, and afterwards the stress is released!
I enjoyed reading this......it's something I'd probably do....infact, I have
Love
consue
And thank you inoc for the nice comments you left on my poems........its greatly appreciated!
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