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Lovingcritters' Critique Rebuttal
Contributed by
norm
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:02:30 AM in AEST
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The Critter says I can do better,
That my work is not up to the letter,
Tell her for me,
Harhar..hehe,
Unless she pays, it doesn't metter.
Copyright ©
norm
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2004-08-10 09:02:30]
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Re: Lovingcritters' Critique Rebuttal
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:28:25 AM AEST
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Well there's my laugh
guess you gave her the shaft
You know I think your poetry is fine,
but they're not paying for yours
and they don't pay for mine.
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Re: Lovingcritters' Critique Rebuttal
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:15:29 PM AEST
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LOL here we go again
Norm and Conni
batting eachother on the chin
all is fair in a poetry war
Ill stay out but instead
stand back and take score!
tee hee Norm you and Conni are 2 cute!
Loves ya both
Michelle
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Re: Lovingcritters' Critique Rebuttal
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:11:16 PM AEST
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That was a test my dear man......you tell me you can't see........OhOhOhMe! You certainly can....how else could you have known what I wrote down? Uh? You and I go back along ways, Norm......but I must say, I was close to being mortified when I read what you said!!!!
I know you're the Universal Lover, and so does everyone else.......so why pretend? It's OK to be sexy, and debaneur' don't you know how we ladies just love it.........It's OK.....so go ahead and dare! And as far as doing better. You got the very best in all the land in Pearl......how could you even reach out for another........and you tell her I said so. OK?
And the winner goes to: Norm the Limerick Genius!!! (however; I must confess.......the reason I've never learned how write Limericks.....is because I know I'll be better than you......and that will make you "sicks") that's a "conword" you taught me that remember? *smiles*
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