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In a room
Contributed by
Luka
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:52:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In a white room
full of darkness
i see a black wall
painted white
with red stains from bloody hands
footprits from a dieing man
walking in and out of this room of sin
no one is around me
as they apear in front of me
those steps are my past
this step may be my last
let me walk the plank
off the ship bound for hell
and brun in the sea of fire
this breath may be my last
Copyright ©
Luka
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2004-08-10 10:52:34]
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Re: In a room
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:39:45 AM AEST
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Good write...it does have that kind of fell to it...good job
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