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I Shouldn't Take Things Out On You
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:40:33 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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I shouldnt take things out on you,
My forked tongue cuts right through,
Huts you smack bang in your heart,
Puts you right back at the start.
You have never done anything wrong,
Anger is aimed where it doesnt belong,
I should show you love not pain,
Fill your days with sunshine & not rain.
Now Im rife with regret & guilt,
I know I cant replace whats been spilt,
Cant take back what has already been said,
I really wish Id have bit my tongue instead.
Your voice didnt have the same happy tone,
When I spoke to you on the phone,
You sounded fed up & quite down,
Like your heart was trailing on the ground.
I wish that my temper didnt rise,
But alas it did what a surprise,
Yet again I have ruined something good,
Made your heart swim in a river of blood.
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pixie
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2004-08-10 11:40:33]
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Re: I Shouldn't Take Things Out On You
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:21:22 PM AEST
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This is an easy read, good job. It flows through most of the lines well and is simple in its honesty. Straightforward.
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Re: I Shouldn't Take Things Out On You
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 01:46:36 AM AEST
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| good flow of your thoughts..hugs my dear girl venkat |
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