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Cupid
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:53:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate you
point your arrow at someone else
your arrow only hurts after the effect has worn off
a lot of the time the wound from the arrow becomes infected
you ***** fairy
take up another sport like baseball
at leat the ball will knock you out for a long time
or darts
they dont go as deep
someone should rip your wings off
im going to stab you w/ one of your arrows
then you will see
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Re: Cupid
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by Luka on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:12:56 PM AEST
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| not so good,the poem had nothing to capture the readers attention. i really have nothing good to say about the poem. But tis ok dont worry about every poet has their good and bad poems, i went and read some of your other ones and heir much better |
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