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Small Ode to Nicole
Contributed by
Starfriend
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 08:57:36 PM in AEST
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oops
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Nicole's day has been bad
She's sounding pretty sad
Too bad, 'cause she's kinda neat
Always sounding really, really sweet
So listen, cheer up little friend
All bad things will come to an end
At least for a while
I hope I can make you smile
This ode is for you
Smile for me, yes, you
Copyright ©
Starfriend
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2004-08-10 20:57:36]
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Re: Small Ode to Nicole
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:12:07 PM AEST
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Very good masterpeice.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Small Ode to Nicole
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:35:07 PM AEST
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| forced rhymes and kind of childish. so if this is for a child, i think it is very good. if its not, then....its not so good. you did create a good tone though, but again for a child. |
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