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Panoramic View
Contributed by
stubbo87
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:03:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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She lives in Malibu
Has cute clothes
And a high IQ
You say you know her well
That your friendship is tried and true
But what would you see
Through a panoramic view?
She has Prada and Jimmy Choo
But she bought them secondhand
Yah she lives in Malibu
But on the other side
And the words I Love You
Are one shes never heard her parents say
What do you see through the panoramic view?
Her super high IQ
Was her ticket to a fancy school
Unlike the money from your Daddys debut
And for all those dances-
Did she ever have an updo?
Or has she ever flown to New York
To write a dance review?
What do you see through the panoramic view?
Her dinner from the drive through
Home alone
But black and blue
Take a look
Shes not like you
Take a look
Through the panoramic view
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stubbo87
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2004-08-10 21:03:54]
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Re: Panoramic View
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:31:20 PM AEST
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| this is cool... flows very well... good job |
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Re: Panoramic View
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 01:24:16 AM AEST
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this is a really good write. keep it up!
luvs ya
~*Jess*~ |
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