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Living Mistake
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Living Mistake
You think you're just a mistake
You don't want to live another day
All you're doing is wasting away
In the life you have made
Thinking there's no reason to stay
When Hell is all you're put through
Living is completely useless to you
You're just a mistake still
Crying your eyes out
Because of what you feel
Thinking razors help
When they just hide
What you feel inside
Releasing through bleeding
To stop all feeling
You want to commit
The biggest mistake
There is to make
Because you couldn't take
All that you were given
All that you are feeling
It is a mistake to give in
And lose your chance to live
When it could've been
Better in the end
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Essentially9
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2004-08-10 21:19:51]
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Re: Living Mistake
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:55:17 PM AEST
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This is a great write as there are so many on this site etc.
I've often searched my heart for a way to help these people.
We more like this.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Living Mistake
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by waos on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:48:05 AM AEST
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| Thats really really good. i really enjoyed it. thanks for posting it, its encouraging. |
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Re: Living Mistake
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:35:12 AM AEST
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| Very good poem..with a good message..K |
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Re: Living Mistake
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:55:26 PM AEST
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Man I really connect with what you write...makes me see more clearer to what I'm feeling...and already know...about myself...and others...great job bro!
Summer |
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Re: Living Mistake
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:27:19 AM AEST
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| This is so good..That last stanza is amazing Jennifer..Living mistake what a damn awesome way to word this..No matter what it is personal or not this is great. |
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