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One memory I have is this...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:00:51 PM in AEST
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One memory I have is this:
a pretty girl in jeans,
crying before me,
her hands steadily wiping...
the tears from her face.
I remember walking
down the stairs to her,
hugging her, comforting her,
as she cries on my shoulder.
I remember the mess
of her long brown hair,
the muffled sniffling sounds she made
in that little rocking chair.
I remember sorrow,
the weight of heartbreak
filling that small room.
I remember the sympathy
I poured over her,
in attempt to
wash the pain away.
I remember her wet tears
staining her otherwise beautiful face;
the sadness all around her.
I knew nothing would ease
the pain, but time,
and a new love...
ahead
into better times,
away from the past,
leaving her tears behind.
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Re: One memory I have is this...
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:02:27 AM AEST
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"I remember sorrow,
the weight of heartbreak
filling that small room." interesting word choice. a strong poem over all shows the importance to keep going.... A++++
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Re: One memory I have is this...
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by rugby_player on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:23:01 PM AEST
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| another great one......something in this really hit home for me and i'm not sure why as of yet....as soon as i know you will know :) |
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Re: One memory I have is this...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:38:09 PM AEST
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| D*amn! This brings back painful memories to me although they were from many decades ago. You're very sweet to have tried to comfort her, I had a few friends like that. This is a beautiful write! Cheers! |
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