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The Mountain
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:08:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look and see a mountain
Thrusting through the sky
Majestic in its beauty
too proud to ever die
It stands through out the ages
Overwhelming all that see
The natives believe it a god
And pray to it fervently
To scientist an object of study
How, what, where, and why
To lovers a place of romance
Their love they pledge with a sigh
To me it is a dream
All I long to be
Standing strong and silent
Hurt a memory
Alas I'm only human
My strength has reached its end
No longer fight the powers
That force my knees to bend
Broken and left with nothing
I raise my eyes to see
That mountain has passed its judgement
On the mess I've made of me
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2004-08-10 23:08:22]
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Re: The Mountain
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by AH on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:10:05 PM AEST
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| sometimes it is hard to make rhyme sound genuine, but you did an excellent job of it. great imagery. |
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Re: The Mountain
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by waos on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:50:56 PM AEST
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| ya. its good. id say more but im exhausted |
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