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The decision
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:48:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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They say that lifes a journey
And if this is really true
Then my path has met a crossroad
A choice I must make about you
It's time to make a decision
To choose which path I take
For our future hangs in the balance
So I dare not make a mistake
The left path is the safest
A route I know so well
But lacking the heights of heaven
Along with the depths of hell
For there I keep my silence
Denying these feelings inside
Maintaining this cloak of friendship
And behind that mask Ill hide
Or do I choose the right path
But it leads I know not where
Perhaps to the gate of heaven itself
Or into the mouth of despair
For there I let the truth be known
And risk my heart and soul
I drop this wall so carefully built
And let fate then take her toll
Are you to be or not to be
The one for whom Ive waited
The object of my life long search
For whom my love is fated
And so I look for a little sign
For the path that I should take
But the angels keep their silence
The decision mine to make
And so I take that fateful step
What the future brings well see
For I cant undo any damage done
May the fates have mercy on me
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mrpeanut64
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2004-08-10 23:48:41]
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Re: The decision
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by AH on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:50:41 PM AEST
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| beautifully written!! |
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Re: The decision
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:14:58 AM AEST
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| Oh my goodness ... you seemed to have looked through a window to my heart and written of my exact situation ... what an incredible feeling it was to read these words! - and so well written, so perfectly expressed - I truly hope you take the road that brings you great happiness ... Jan |
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Re: The decision
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 03:56:25 PM AEST
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mrpeanut64, slow and safe, steady and sure may win the race ... But I'll bet the bunny had better stories ! Never taking the chance ... means you'll never know, and in some cases may always wonder. Another pleasurable read.
Naz ~ |
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Re: The decision
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:27:10 AM AEST
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yeah...wish I knew the answers but I don't.....I feel the same way..bravo
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