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White Clean World
Contributed by
AllAlone
on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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In a white clean world darkness lies
Under the cinder of happy lives
Lifes goes on in it's cheerful, happy way
The darkness lingers all though no one will say
Perfect, pretty,happy,clean
Full of utmost glitter and sheen
From the outside looking in
All you ever see is sin
Dark and black the inside be
Why you say?
Because of thee
The happy, perfect, pretty ones
We must be like them out in the sun.
But in my self in my dark room my true self Shineth through
Doubt and worry strive to be like you
Could it be that your'e dark too.
Copyright ©
AllAlone
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2002-10-31 11:00:00]
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Re: White Clean World
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by Merd on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 05:47:51 AM AEST
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| Wow, that pretty much sums up everything about how people act everyday. To say it in poetry for people to understand is amazing to me. I really enjoyed that. |
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Re: White Clean World
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by EndEformEtrancE on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:27:36 AM AEST
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| I love the rythym in this poem, thanks a lot for sharing it. |
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