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Your Note Today
Contributed by
CaddishCut
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:53:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I just received your note today and I read it aloud
Of why you rid yourself away and how you are so proud
Of you and I and our love
This doesn't make sense
All that you were writing of
There was no reason for your end
'I've loved you for so long
I love you so much
But it's time for me to be gone
I will miss your touch'
I read it in your note today
I found you on a rope today tied to the fan
I don't know why you rid yourself away
It was in your hand, the note that I received today
Your face looked so pale
I stood up on the table and kissed you one last time
The memories of this will never slowly fade away
Of why you rid yourself away, I read it in your note today
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CaddishCut
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2004-08-11 11:53:26]
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Re: Your Note Today
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:00:27 PM AEST
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awwww this is such an emotional and sad write, it must be hard to lose loved ones to suicide... I can relate.
well worded and great flow
pixie xx |
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