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An Act for the Sky
Contributed by
Gabriel
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 01:00:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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i'm really just an actor
for my eye in the sky
and everything i'm saying
and feeling's just a lie
just for their entertainment
i'll lie in bed and cry
in my script it says despair
to tell the truth i hardly care
i'm plagued with dramatic
ir-o-ny
and i hope that one day
i-can-be
just myself or me
an no [nothing] more
and along comes that spector
i really abhor
revealed in slumber
as [amirror] and [adoor]
Copyright ©
Gabriel
... [
2004-08-11 13:00:33]
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Re: An Act for the Sky
(User Rating: 1 )
by waos on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:14:22 PM AEST
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| i thought that was pretty cool, i really like how you set it up |
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Re: An Act for the Sky
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by Nobrainer on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 01:22:07 PM AEST
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| wow, I really enjoyed your poem, awesome use of words, great job!
~jess |
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