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The way you ache
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 01:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The way you ache is almost visible
As I try desperately to get you to understand
Every step I make I fall a little
But you may no longer take my hand
So this is my attempt to get you to see
I am no longer who you want me to be
I will speak words that will cut through your skin
And I will dismiss you and ignore what you say
So that as you think of me bitterly
The hatred will grow more each day
This is my attempt, as you hold back your tears and stare
To show you that youre hanging onto what isnt even there
So Ill deliberately avoid you
And leave when you enter each room
You wont understand it but you will one day soon
This is my attempt to get you to despise who I am
So that you will stop hurting and one day youll understand
I will do anything for you to see
That youre hurting yourself more this way
The more you hate me, the more youll stop loving
And someday the pain will fade
So heres my final attempt as I push you violently to the floor
My cold hearted way to tell you I dont know how to love you anymore
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2004-08-11 13:06:01]
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Re: The way you ache
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 01:20:22 PM AEST
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a very pained and emotional write, great flow
pixie xx |
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Re: The way you ache
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:46:41 PM AEST
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That is awesome. I love it! Especially the last line. Very strong. Great job!
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