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Mommy please know my cries!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Dear,Mommy when I start to cry,
please don't be angry,or ask me why,
Youre my mommy,are'nt you suppose to know,
I can't yet tell you,so this is how I show,
My tears might not always mean I'm in pain,
and I know when I throw my fits you go insane,
I'm sorry mommy,I really do love you and dad,
But sometimes I need you,when I'm sad,
I need your hugs to get me through the night,
I don't mean to make you & daddy fight,
I need your kisses to say you love me to,
I'm sorry mommy for the things that I do,
I stress you out,you want to scream,
I know you don't want to be mean,
But thats how I tell you what I need,
When I'm hurting inside,I wont bleed,
So next time when you see me cry,
Please hug me,It wont hurt to try,
All I need is your love to help me,
Please be patient and you will see,
We will do this together I know we can,
I really want us both to just be friends!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-10-31 13:20:00]
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Re: Mommy please know my cries!
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by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 03:02:49 PM AEST
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This is so sad and
beautiful at the same time
Great write
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Mommy please know my cries!
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by rbp861 on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:34:33 PM AEST
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| beautiful write,keep up your good work |
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Re: Mommy please know my cries!
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 12:23:06 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write from a wonderful author. It is all many people need when they start to cry, a reassuring hug. Just lovely. ((( Hugs))) Yellowrose |
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Re: Mommy please know my cries!
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by Bunty on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:13:41 AM AEST
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| That was really beautiful, so well wrote from a child's point of view. I'm sure it helped your friend to understand her son a little better. |
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