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Getting by
Contributed by
lil_jewel
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
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I dont know why,
I even try.
Its all a lie,
But they deny,
Why do they pry?
Bout what I do in my,
room at night.
How I get by.
If I get high.
If I stay dry.
What I buy.
My business is my.
I can get by,
Without their try.
If I start to cry,
They walk by.
So then why,
Do they lie?
Say they would cry,
If I die.
Are they being sly?
Think they can retry?
That just over nigh,
I might reply,
That I will rely,
On some councilor guy,
To get me by?
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lil_jewel
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2002-10-31 14:40:00]
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Re: Getting by
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 06:59:04 PM AEST
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G'day Lil_Angel,
So sad the song comin'from your heart.
But so much of what you say is true,
I like your poetry your feelings are well expressed.
Can I offer a little quote,
"Friends are the family we choose for ourselves."
Catch Ya,
Fwog |
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Re: Getting by
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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Hi, Fwog here.
A few moments ago I posted a comment on
Getting by>. lil_jewel
however I addressed the reply to Lil Angel,
I apologise for the mix up and any confusion I may have caused.
I have sent a private message to lil_jewel apologising also.
Catch Ya! |
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Re: Getting by
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:02:05 AM AEST
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| Let me guess its your parents you are talking about? Parents will be nosey & dont want you to lock your door,& wonder what they are doing at all times! They are not trying to be mean they are showing they care! You will thank them some day! Good luck! Christina |
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Re: Getting by
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by lil_Jewel on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:35:29 PM AEST
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| actually, it isn't my parents I am talking about. It is some of my friends that are bothering me about what I do and if it is right or wrong. Thanx for commenting on my poem though. |
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Re: Getting by
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by shepdog1972 on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:33:49 PM AEST
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i really liked this alot ...i also like the fact that you are aware that your parents care...they really do or they wouldnt even bother.....i also have quote......"when a parent will pry you cannot deny the love they show will only grow".....
john |
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Re: Getting by
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by lil_Jewel on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:26:53 PM AEST
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This poem isn't about my parents. It is about some people who call themselves my friends, but that is only when I do something that they don't like. If need someone to talk to about something, they just keep walking by.
-Jewel Abbott |
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