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The Night Sky
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:11:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ill kiss the lonely stars goodnight
Ask the moon to stay so bright
In the night they hold all my fears
Stop me from shedding so many tears
The night sky is my only friend
I know it will be there until the end
Even when the sun takes its place
I know the moon still has a smiling face
I know the night sky will always be there
There is no one who can even compare
I know my secrets are safe and sound
And I know where the night can always be found
Take my hand and Ill show you the night
I promise it will always give you light
Whenever your scared and dont know what to do
The night will be there to will listen to you
As long as you kiss the lonely stars goodnight
And ask the moon to stay so bright
Then they will hold all your fears
And they will keep you from shedding so many tears
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CrimsonTears
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2004-08-11 22:11:25]
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Re: The Night Sky
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by waos on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:05:43 PM AEST
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that was good, i really liked it, nice job.
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Re: The Night Sky
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by ps_ihateyou on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:47:00 AM AEST
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| nice job. i really like it a lot. |
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Re: The Night Sky
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:09:33 AM AEST
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I think it's great as one of my friends is the nite sky.
Beautifull!
hugg, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Night Sky
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by pixie on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:02:20 AM AEST
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amazing write, you are very talented
pixie xx |
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Re: The Night Sky
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:59:11 PM AEST
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That is a really great write! Like I have said before you have talent. Dont let it go! Keep it up!
~sMiLe~!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: The Night Sky
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:21:28 PM AEST
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Well, youre a very good poet
im jealous
BS XxxX |
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Re: The Night Sky
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:21:56 PM AEST
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| Five out of five lol |
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