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In Hell
Contributed by
Chicken
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've listened the whole time,
But my secret you must now know.
Evil companions are what I seek,
In this world of gilded gold.
I had a crush on you sometime back,
Yet your friendship proved to be worth more.
I thought a demon could have no allies,
But you proved this to be a tale of lore.
You must understand,
That you never set me truly free.
For in Hell I was, my Ginnie dear
Long before the flames touched thee.
I thought that I could spare you,
And let you pass through Heaven's pearly gates.
But it seems you let your life be ruled,
By the premises of logic and fate.
I have only one question to ask,
Before this, our chain ends.
Will you at least walk this earthly road with me,
As my only true, understanding friend?
Copyright ©
Chicken
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2002-10-31 15:00:00]
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Re: In Hell
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by amos on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 04:19:52 AM AEST
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Can a friendship like that be dark? Seems I may have wrote one of my poems a little too late..and I should have read this before hand.
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Re: In Hell
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by rbp861 on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 12:00:55 AM AEST
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| very good work |
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Re: In Hell
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 11:53:40 AM AEST
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You let the cat out of the bag Drew2! Now everyone knows my personality is just as twisted as yours... j/k!!! Maybe, since they haven't the priveledge of reading all the way through our chain of poems, that hell symbolizes the pains here on Earth... heaven's gates symbolizes the freedom from pain, and the long earthly road is the journey we take. Do you think we should let them in on our little secret??? Nah... hehe...
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