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my freedom
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:11:59 PM in AEST
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i can feel the black seep into my veins
as i watch the sky turn an inky dark
the pain deepens and i am not yet free
when the night comes
you die feeding on your fears
and i linger, hoping to find some feeling
but no hope is satisfied
random words and things you've said
dart across my thoughts
ive become a meaning less jumble of nothing
with hopes so high
but killed by you when you gather your courage
and i cant have my freedom while you have your strength
in the end one of us must loose something
yet another night comes and day fades away
bringing closer with it my freedom of you
while you stay fearful
i can hope and pray for your demise
all i wanted was to fly
but you had to clip my wings
and kill my fake celestial skies
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Re: my freedom
(User Rating: 1 )
by waos on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST
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| that wasn't bad. the last few lines were definetely the best. |
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Re: my freedom
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by Yousef on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:47:06 PM AEST
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| Sometimes "pointless jumble of words" makes sence, and by writing more I'm sure you will do much better, Good luck. |
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