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Under The Sea
Contributed by
Rylo
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:36:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Under the sea,
Is where she came to me.
Long red hair,
And so much love to share.
She swam gracefully,
Under the sea.
Eyes of emerald green,
Sparkle under the sea.
Her actions speak of love so divine,
As she has won this heart of mine.
For a merman, she has made of me.
Life couldn’t get any better,
Then here under the sea.
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-08-12 01:36:11]
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Re: Under The Sea
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:41:38 AM AEST
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Very cute write, friend.
good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Under The Sea
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:46:16 AM AEST
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I love this great job Ron
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Re: Under The Sea
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:40:36 AM AEST
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Quite unique.
I liked the first line, the way the poem begins -
'Under the sea,
Is where she came to me.'
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Re: Under The Sea
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by pixie on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:58:35 AM AEST
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wonderful write,
pixie xx |
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