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Searching For Eternity
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Searching for eternity, no other takes your place,
Theyre all a dim reflection and none can match your grace.
Living for the dream, that one day you will be mine,
A foolish heart thats full of hope, it is my only crime.
Honesty it is my shield, your love can be my sword,
But without you I am weaponless, my heart a racing horde.
My emotions overrun me, despair brings out my cries,
I fear Ive lost my purpose, somewhere in your eyes.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Searching For Eternity
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by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 03:55:06 PM AEST
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This is so sad
beatiful write though
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Searching For Eternity
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 04:32:20 PM AEST
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| I feel this too ... beautiiful poetry. |
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Re: Searching For Eternity
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:51:00 AM AEST
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This it a truely beautiful piece of poetry. Keep on writing.
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Re: Searching For Eternity
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:13:16 AM AEST
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| Aww Doug, there is love there for you. Tons of it. When it all is coming down on you..and you feel you can't do no more...just take a walk in the other room..I think you know what I mean... |
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Re: Searching For Eternity
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by Moca on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:22:12 AM AEST
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Tragic, unreturned love... God, what can one do in this situation? I know how you feel... I can feel the torment in this poem and I know it well... lovely write.
Love,
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