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The Nightmare that Never Came
Contributed by
dartsofplsre87
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:15:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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There was a day when I dreamt of a place so happy and pure.
You were there and stood by my side.
You told me your secrets as well as some lies.
You made me smile and you made me frown.
You rested your head on my shoulder as you slowly slept to the sound of your favorite battle on TV.
Why did I believe you?
Why did I not see the look in your eyes, as I told you how proud of you I was.
As everyday passes you slowly fade away, again.
Your killing yourself, as well as me.
Please don't leave me!
Do you now how much you mean to me?
You mean so much.
I'll love you till death, where love will be replaced by remorse.
My brilliant dream is now a nightmare.
I see your black coffen as it is lowered into the ground.
Forever your gone.
There is no more of your jokes, your kisses, your laughter, your voice.
I hope this is not good bye.
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dartsofplsre87
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2004-08-12 04:15:37]
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Re: The Nightmare that Never Came
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:37:52 AM AEST
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Very emotional poem, welldone
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Re: The Nightmare that Never Came
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by darkplaidbabe on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:17:52 AM AEST
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very sad poem. you obviously care a great deal for this person. good luck with them. **hugs**
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Re: The Nightmare that Never Came
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:38:41 PM AEST
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It is hard to watch someone kill themselves this way. I watch it everyday my sister is doing this to herself. She has three kids a four year old, a one year old, and a three month old. And you think she would love them enough to want to change but she don't. I love my son and would never hurt him like that. But the nightmare will come one day. Great write.
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