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Crimson Sheets
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:00:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I JUST WANT MY LIFE BACK,
I TRIED TO PAY WITH BLOOD,
YOU SHOWD ME ALL THE THINGS I LACK,
AND NOW IM SINKING IN THE MUD,
LET ME BLEED, LET ME BURN,
I THINK THAT TIME HAS COME,
ITS JUST ABOUT MY LONELY TURN,
AND SOON IT WILL BE DONE,
I LOVED YOU ALL, I CALLED YOU MY FRIENDS,
I LOVED YOU AND YOU HAVE NO CLUE,
I TRIED TO HELP YOU BUT THIS IS HOW IT ENDS,
AND I DIED FOR YOU ITS TRUE,
THIS BLUNT KNIFE WILL CUT ME DEEP,
AND LET THE PAIN RUN FREE,
THIS BLUNT KNIFE YOULL ALWAYS KEEP,
TO LATER REMIND YOU OF ME,
CRIMSON SHEETS WILL STAIN YOUR VIEW,
YOULL REGRET THE SITE YOURVE SEEN,
YOU FINALLY UNDERSTAND ALL I SAID WAS TRUE,
AFTER YOU HEAR MY LUSTFUL SCREAM,
SHADOWS RULE THE UNDERWORLD,
FOR YOUR WORDS THAT I HAVE CRIED,
JUST COS IM A LONELY LITTLE GIRL,
YOU WOULDNT EVEN CARE IF I DIED,
Copyright ©
corrupted_minds
... [
2004-08-12 05:00:45]
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Re: Crimson Sheets
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:10:03 AM AEST
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a heart-wrenching write. Really powerful.
love always, dizza
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Re: Crimson Sheets
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by Solnubis on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 09:43:06 AM AEST
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Can hear the hurt, but trust me there is always at least one person who cares. Find that person and shed your tears.
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Re: Crimson Sheets
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by darkplaidbabe on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:21:50 AM AEST
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wow.... i love this poem!! it flows nicely and you express your emotions so well. awesome write. ihope you feel better. **hugs and tears**
Brynna |
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Re: Crimson Sheets
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by AndreaJ on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:30:09 PM AEST
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this too describes how i feel at times......
AndreaJ |
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Re: Crimson Sheets
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:00:22 AM AEST
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i feeeel your pain!
i see what you mean about the content.
the stucture is awesome though... |
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Re: Crimson Sheets
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:55:53 PM AEST
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Think about this... You may not realize it, but it's 100% true.
1. At least 2 people in this world love you so much they would
die for you.
2. At least 15 people in this world love you in some way.
3. The only reason anyone would ever hate you is because they want to be just like you.
4. A smile from you can bring happiness to anyone, even if
they don't like you.
5. Every night, SOMEONE thinks about you before they go to sleep.
6. You mean the world to someone.
7. If not for you, someone may not be living.
8. You are special and unique.
9. Someone that you don't even know exists, loves you.
10. When you make the biggest mistake ever, something good comes from it.
11. When you think the world has turned its back on you, take a look: you most likely turned your back on the world.
12. When you think you have no chance of getting what you
want, you probably won't get it, but if you believe in yourself,
probably, sooner or later, you will get it.
13. Always remember the compliments you received. Forget
about the rude remarks.
14. Always tell someone how you feel about them; you will
feel much better when they know.
15. If you have a great friend, take the time to let them know that they are great.
lots of love*allymp |
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