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....when timid the strolling one dear
Contributed by
inoc
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Life is like a -tug of war
where everyone is pulling
-wanting more
the aching from the tugging
and the blisters on the hand
will always be there
-for the score
time is the measure
-of our life span
following a shadow to our plan
without it we can't reason
-with the changing
and capture every moment
with the glimpse of the light
-for the fellow man
teasing the greatness
-of all our fear
when timid the strolling one dear
tracking the heat
around me
will surely make everything clear
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inoc
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2004-08-12 10:12:48]
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Re: ....when timid the strolling one dear
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:46:52 AM AEST
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I love the title, it really caught my attention.
A great write, it made my day |
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Re: ....when timid the strolling one dear
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:03:56 PM AEST
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I loved this...especially the first verse.....
Keep them coming...
Jenni |
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