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When i DIE
Contributed by
Lucky1388
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:58:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I think about how everyone would react when im dead,
My frends would look at me in my coffin and shake there head,
My mom would cry and cry and wish she was dead,
My dad would just hink of the last thing i said,
No one expected i would do such a thing they though i was happy an average teen.
They found all my poem and read them through they wished they found them earlier so they could help me through,
If only they knew the pain i felt they would sympathize me then all my problems would be set free.
Its over and done with no way will i come back,
Remember im in HELL now screaming and yelling GOD please take me back!!!
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2004-08-12 10:58:17]
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Re: When i DIE
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by faffeee on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:00:11 PM AEST
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| nice poem. im not one to judge, but ive been in your position where it seems NO-ONE understands me. but the only way things started to get better, was when i finally told my parents how i was feeling. yeah it hurt and it hurt them, but its the first step. xxx |
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Re: When i DIE
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by dartsofplsre87 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:07:00 AM AEST
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| Great poem the last line is really good |
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