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Finality
Contributed by
skyblumoon
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:33:33 AM in AEST
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You say freedom is what you need...
But then why bother to plant the love seed?
You said you wanted something more...
As you selfishly walked out the door...
My mind told you to go away...
As my heart begged you to stay...
My soul you buried in a grave...
My heart you hid in a cave...
Whatever we may have had...
Just like sour milk it went bad...
So the next time I think I'm in love...
I'll stand on a rooftop, & please just give me a shove...
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2004-08-12 11:33:33]
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Re: Finality
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by faffeee on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:53:22 AM AEST
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| im really feeling what youre saying here cos the same things just happened to me. im sorry, i hope things get better, youve just got to learn that not all boys are the same i spose, though i know its very hard to believe. good write. xxx |
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Re: Finality
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:32:22 PM AEST
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Awesome write. It's kinda crazy what love makes you feel. I mean Love is suppose to make you happy right. All it ever did was depress me so go figure. Now the only reason I have for living is my very wonderful very beautiful son. I thank God for him ever day. He Is my everything.
~Amy |
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Re: Finality
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by Archie on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:17:06 AM AEST
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| That is really sad. I haven't read any of your poems in a while so I thought I would check this one out.. Good write. |
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Re: Finality
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:42:49 PM AEST
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| Nice write. |
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Re: Finality
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 10:47:14 AM AEST
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Interesting write. Sounds like a common problem, but you've handled it with originality. The sarcasm at the end works well.
Stitch |
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Re: Finality
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by izzy on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:03:35 PM AEST
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Goodness me. Where we having a bad a hair day? This is really good. Sorry your heart is broken.
Izzy |
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Re: Finality
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:42:06 AM AEST
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Awesome write... Blu... I too like the sarcasm at the end...
~Donna~ |
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