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Broken Dream
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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With so many different feelings,
My heart was happy, now its peeling,
It silently bleeds inside my chest,
Its given up & wants to lay to rest.
I feel anger rise from my toes,
Where it will stop no-one knows,
This rage is tinged with sadness too,
My red temper is mixed with deep blue.
All I can do is let out an unhappy sigh,
Inside my soul wants to cry,
I thought that I was on my way,
To fulfilling a dream I have every day.
My eyes feel watery & cold,
As the deceit begins to unfold,
Frustration creeps quietly around,
It takes a hold but with no sound.
I was just too blind to see,
A fool was being made out of me,
They really must have seen me coming,
Toward my dreams I was running.
Wishing I could turn back the clock,
Saving myself from another knock,
But I didnt see what was in front of my face,
Excitement was travelling at too fast a pace.
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pixie
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2004-08-12 12:14:26]
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:09:29 PM AEST
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really liked the line -
'I feel anger rise from my toes,
Where it will stop no-one knows,'
enjoyed reading this piece it took me on an exciting, sad melloncollie journey. |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:26:41 PM AEST
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Awwww..... I hope you feel better soon! I too, wish to turn back the clock, but then again, where in time would I take it? This is a gut wrenching write! Feel better soon!!!
(((((krissee)))))
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:39:04 PM AEST
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| I can relly see the anger in this, I know that this will pass & you'll move on! Good luck Christina |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by darkplaidbabe on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:23:13 AM AEST
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i love your use of colors in this poem with the "red temper is mixed with deep blue" line, absolutely beautiful! great write!
Brynna |
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