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I close my eyes
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I close my eyes and there I see
A vision without reality
For there you are with all your charms
Although no longer in my arms
Though I struggle and I Try
I can never stop those words goodbye
And then I wake with eyes of tears
Destined to hurt throughout the years
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2004-08-12 15:34:17]
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Re: I close my eyes
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:29:10 PM AEST
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Oh, how familiar that feeling is. Along time friend, and companion. Well written. I like that. Nice one mrpeanut.
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Re: I close my eyes
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:51:30 PM AEST
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| very dark depressing write - well done i thought this was a worthy read. |
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Re: I close my eyes
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:55:11 PM AEST
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I know the feeling and you described them well. I loved it. keep writing it will ease the pain.
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Re: I close my eyes
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:40:36 AM AEST
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This is so sad. Sometimes destiny can be very cruel. The rhythm is perfect in this verse. Very beautifully penned.
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Re: I close my eyes
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 10:00:20 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful.......
I was going to try and describe how I felt after reading this, but I just can't put it into words....
Yours said it all x
Star x x x
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