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Gabriel(the 1st time around)
Contributed by
darkplaidbabe
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:53:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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For you
You never meant to hurt me
This much I know
But my heart is still broken
Though it may not show
I want to forget
Or just start over again
But I cant let go yet
I want to go back to when
Our eyes first met in that crowded room
And it was then our fate was sealedor maybe our doom
I couldve fixed it all,
If youd only told me what was wrong
If I didnt think itd scare you
Id worship the ground you walked on
Ill do anything to regain your sweet, sweet love
Dont you see? You and I, we fit like hand and glove
I dont know why you left me
Just that I died inside
And now Im alone, broken-hearted
And I must confide
I need to be with you
You are my one desire
I long just to hold you
You set my soul afire
But if you do return
And give me one more chance
I dont want to be burned,
Jump through hoops, or dance
I dont want to be played with
I dont feel like being used
And if I have the say of who-dumps-who
I think Id like to choose
I love you with all of my heart
And that will never change
But if youre gonna be with me
Would you please arrange?
To love and hold me forever
Never let me down
And please be there to catch me
If I fall to the ground?
All of this Id gladly do for you
If youd simply request
Id give my last drop of blood
Or even take one in the chest
This is how much you mean to me
Your safety worth more than my own
And if youd only give me a second chance
Youll see love like youve never known
I admit that before I was much too timid
I didnt show you how I felt
But now I realize how strong my love can be
I only look at you and I just melt
I was lost without love, trapped in a dark abyss
But I knew Id been found that first time we kissed
Oh, how I want to feel that again
If only just once more
So if you take me back, and when,
Ill be content, you can be sure
My love for you will never wither nor die
And if we try ,
Thats how you and I can be
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darkplaidbabe
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2004-08-12 15:53:27]
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Re: Gabriel(the 1st time around)
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:41:43 AM AEST
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very long but written so well great job.
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Re: Gabriel(the 1st time around)
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by mindancer on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:33:17 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one, you've written it very well and with lots of true emotion well done!
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Re: Gabriel(the 1st time around)
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:09:40 PM AEST
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| I'm assuming this took you ages to write because its so well thought thru and planned - yet so raw with emnotion - great write |
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