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PILL POPING
Contributed by
suzie007uk
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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PILL POPPING
Depression again has hold of me
My medication intake was nil
But lately I have cried a river
Again Im on them still
Those tiny white pills make me angry
The ones I have to take
Each month a new prescription
I think for heavens sake
Reliant upon these silly pills
I dont want this anymore
But for me to be normal
In the end I find it a chore
My mind is missing that essence
That makes you happy inside
When not on medication
I want to go and hide
Many months its going to take
For me to be just me
So for now Im pill popping
To stay insanely free
SUZIE
03/02/04
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2004-08-12 17:26:04]
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Re: PILL POPING
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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Its almost brutal the way in which you lay this one down. I found your rhyme in stark contrast to the gritty content, as it flowed without caution. You do well to write out your problems in this way - at least you can let others appreciate in some degree the state of mine you were in at the time you wrote it.
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