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°°°True Love's Pain°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
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All my life i searched for true love
I felt i had found it more than once
I searched far and wide below and above
But there was always that little hunch
When i saw the way you loved me deep
It stole my heart completely away
I'd sit and look in the mirror and weep
At how ugly i am in all ways
I knew i would never be good enough
There was nothing i had to offer
I was hard on us, i made it real rough
But i knew you belonged to another
I tried to prove to myself i was good for you
And true your dreams i could make
I constantly said that i love you
Knowing i was your biggest mistake
I wish i had your beautiful self esteem
And that i felt worth somthing in life
I wish to you i hadn't been mean
But i did try to make things right
Nobody ever wanted a life with me
Enough to share and give their all
Instead they always gave up on me
So back in my corner i crawl
I wanted to dream and share time with you
And make your world a sacred place
If you hadn't given up on me so soon
We'd be standing face to face
My heart kept loving, in you it grew
Your love inside me will forever haunt
I dreamt, trusted, and beleived in you
Now be happy, you got what you want
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-10-31 19:20:00]
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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| wow, Oreo, another wonderful write, thanks for sharing this, hope you found true love |
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 11:27:34 PM AEST
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| Wow... great poem Oreo... I can relate... |
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:46:17 AM AEST
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Oreo great poem again!
Maybe you need to love yourself before others can love you!Good luck
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by rockshv on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:52:10 AM AEST
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good poem! it goes together nicely
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by LostDream on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 04:22:57 AM AEST
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I perfectly understand what you feel....but keep on loving life for everything it gives us...all the goods and all the bads must have a sense,a reason to exist...and keep on turning your emotions into poetry!You've got a great way of writing!Thanx
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:31:52 AM AEST
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| Hello OreO,
This is a great write! I once thought I found my soulmate but now we're not even friends anymore. Those words are how I felt... Like I was not good enuff for her. But she was my first true love and I will never forget her!
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by mandy091706187 on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 10:20:53 AM AEST
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Loved it... It's GREAT!!!! I LOVE YOU OreO!!!!!!!!! lol dunno if I'm ya true love tho =P
-Mandy |
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Re: °°°True Love's Pain°°°
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 11:55:58 PM AEST
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very powerful piece of work! wow! very moving!
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