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The Next Day
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:23:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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You cannot help but wonder
what the Next Day will bring
Well it be a little different
or just the same old thing
You think a change is needed
from the boring life you live
Going to the same places
where there is no one there to give
Give what you have to offer
some friendship and some love
Not idle chatter and drinking
and the usual push and shove
Could you find an amiable place
where you might be able to dance
Maybe a special person
and even a little romance
That would make the Next Day
much easier to bare
To have somebody to talk to
some friendship and love to share
Wouldn't it just be wonderful
to have a life like this
To come home to a lovely person
and be greeted with a kiss
Copyright ©
Bruce
... [
2004-08-12 22:23:24]
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Re: The Next Day
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:37:16 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem it flows like river and has a lot of emotion. In poetry If you have emotion when you write it, it more then likely express it. Im glad I read it.
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Re: The Next Day
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by Stew on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:39:20 PM AEST
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i like this poem. i'm glad i have someone to talk to.:) of course it's you, but i don't think the kissing part. :) well, excellent poem.
love forever,
stew |
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Re: The Next Day
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:10:07 AM AEST
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Im home honey!! Bruce another enjoyable write forgive me I just got back from bowling a little hyper!
Michelle |
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Re: The Next Day
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:38:08 AM AEST
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| Very sweet. |
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