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Grow up
Contributed by
playitforward
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Men are angry all to often,
in a rush to fight.
their frozen heart,
to dark to soften,
will never see the light.
They hide behind a wall of rage
that seems to set the free
I know this wall
is just a cage
and no one has the key.
His hands have been in constant pain
from slipping down the social chain
the sound of people laughting
while their pointing at his face
had brought him to the breaking point
and put him in his place.
I'd plug his ears to stop the noise
to me there's nothing sadder
than starting with skater boys
to climb the social ladder.
Bad idea to step to me
I'm smarter than the devil
you'd think with glasses he could see
hes on a lower level...
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Re: Grow up
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 10:32:47 PM AEST
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playitforward,
This is a very good poem, I enjoyed reading it
Sad that some people never learn...
Daniela
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Re: Grow up
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:43:47 AM AEST
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| Sometimes men hide behind their anger thats the only way they know how to deal with it! Good luck.Christina |
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Re: Grow up
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by rockshv on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:47:41 AM AEST
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Good use of words!!!
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Re: Grow up
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 02:55:24 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this....glad you didn't get your (_,_) kicked....:>)
Jenni |
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Re: Grow up
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by rbps861 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 08:52:48 PM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: Grow up
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by penman on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 02:32:57 PM AEST
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| Too bad life brings so many people into one's world that have such ill directed power. I wonder if the person knows that he has been immortalized in print? Ah, the poet's revenge. Great job. |
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Re: Grow up
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by Opium on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 06:03:17 AM AEST
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| Well done, but if this guy is a stupid as he seems, I don't think these wise words would mean anything to him |
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