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death of a flame
Contributed by
notwhatitseems
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:10:07 PM in AEST
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What happens inside the flame during its short life
bright red streams of energy flying of its fuel
full off energy full of light
countless reactions accruing all at once
it creates a symphony of destruction
or is it creation
creation of life
creation of worlds
creation of galaxies universes
unknown to us because of their scale
but just as important as
our life
our world
our galaxy our universe
we all exist because of a flame
our universe can be extinguished just the same
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2004-08-12 23:10:07]
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Re: death of a flame
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by TheRaven on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:02:24 AM AEST
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so true. great write, really makes the reader think.
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Re: death of a flame
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:11:45 AM AEST
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makes my mind whirl great write
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Re: death of a flame
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by shorty_52 on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:13:30 AM AEST
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this is a really good poem. the rhythim is good. and it duzn't loose it's beat. beautifully written. keep up the good work.
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Re: death of a flame
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:14:42 AM AEST
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| Great..very thoughtful and amazing. K |
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