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The Vampiress pt 1
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:09:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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she walks the cold winter streets
holding a sensual air
she lures a young women into her home
using her hypnotic stare
she lets the lady's imagination fly
trying to figure what erotic fantasy will be filled
she let the girl do to her whatever she wished
one last pleasure before the woman was killed
in the heat of the moment
she places her lips on the yong girls neck neck
she sunk her teeth into the juggular vein
a painful sensation the woman didnt expect
she sucked the warm crimson liquid
but stops before the girl is dead
she looks to the Vampiress with pleading eyes
lying helplessly on the bed
she felt a sympathy for the girl
something she had never felt before
but was it only sympathy
or could it be something more
the Vampiress said "i can see what must be done"
she must make the girl one of her own kind
she bestowed the Vampires Curse on the girl
for some reason she couldnt leave this lady behind
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Re: The Vampiress pt 1
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:13:16 AM AEST
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ohhhhhhhh this is cool a total different twist on the vampyres tradition I loved this!
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Re: The Vampiress pt 1
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by pixie on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:12:04 AM AEST
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hmmmmm intresting, loved it,,
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